Thursday, February 18, 2016

Why It's Better to Write Slower During a Rewrite


I feel like the writing community is really big on speed. I was browsing Pinterest last night and all of these posts like "how to write faster", "how to write 10,000 words in a day", etc. kept coming up. It's obvious speed is valued when it comes to writing. Especially with the massive popularity of Nanowrimo. For those who don't know, Nanowrimo takes place during November, national writing month. The goal is to write an entire novel (50,000 words) in a month. Which is a great goal. And I think Nano definitely gets people writing. And that's the most important thing isn't it? Putting words down on a page. I myself am an extremely fast writer. I can crank out 1,500 to 2,000 words an hour when I'm hammering out my first draft. And I think that's a good thing.

Getting the words out quickly initially is a good thing.


But what about what comes next? The dreaded revisions. There are some authors who like revising. They are clearly not human because revisions are quite possibly the most painful thing I've ever experienced. It is awful. I just started a complete rewrite of my current WIP after weeks of character profiling, world-building, plotting and creating my magic system. And at first, I thought there was something wrong with me. 

I wasn't cranking out the words as quickly as usual.


Why? Because I was really thinking and contemplating the words I was choosing. I was working on making sure what I was writing conveyed who my characters were. I was focusing more on the tiny little nuances that make a world, that build a character. And that my friends, is where the magic happens. 

First drafts are for word vomiting. Second drafts are for actually writing something good.


My first draft is horrid. A 3rd grader could probably write a better book. Okay, maybe not quite, but it's pretty awful. I just needed to get the words on the page so I had a somewhat loose idea of what the story is actually going to look like by the end. Call it my version of plotting... But now that I have a plot and character sheets sitting in front of my face while I write, I find myself slowing down and taking my time. Choosing my words carefully. You know the famous saying "think before you speak"? 

Think before you rewrite. 


This is my newest slogan. I went back and reread my first chapter of my rewrite and guess what? I wasn't entirely unhappy with it. It still needs work, but I'm actually mildly pleased with how it turned out. And I know that it's because I slowed down and took my time. It will take longer to complete this rewrite. But the quality of the writing is going to be 5,000 times better. This isn't just applicable to writing though. 

Sometimes you have to slow down in life in order to achieve success.


You can't rush a good thing. Do billionaires make their money overnight? Unless they won the lottery, then the answer is no. They woke up early every day and slowly ground away at their goals until they achieved them. And they continue to do that every day to keep their billions. Writing is no different. It doesn't matter if you write 10,000 words a day or 100 words a day. What matters is the quality of those words. Are they words you're happy with or are they words that you're going to have to go back and rewrite again? For the 3rd or 4th time? I urge you to slow down during your rewrites. Take the time to contemplate your words and your goals. Slow and steady wins the race. 

Are you fast writer or slower? Do you vomit out your first drafts like me? What's your revision process? Do you find yourself writing slower during revisions? Do you think that's a good thing or a bad thing? 

10 comments:

  1. I like your writing posts. It makes me kind of inspired to not give up writing. Also if you ever need someone to beta read for you, *raises hand* :) I think for me, I never get to the revision stage, ha. I get caught up rereading what I have and then eventually I give up on it bc I don't like it.

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    1. Thanks! I'm glad you like them because when I first decided to start doing them I was like "uh what if no one is interested in this..." I will definitely be having you beta read for me. Duh. Lol. Revisions are the worst. I have never actually finished revising a WIP before because I get so discouraged. It's so hard!!

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  2. This is so true! I'm wrapping up a first draft of my most recent project and I'm just going all out, everything down, no wrong answers. It's actually kind of exhausting! I'm looking forward to moving around through the text once it is finished and figuring out just how to arrange everything. The difference between a first draft and a second draft is the difference between moving all your belongings into a new house and actually unpacking and deciding how to decorate :)

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    1. Yes! What a great analogy! It really is. The first draft is dumping all your shit in the house and the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, etc. are all about making it pretty. :D

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  3. I really love this post! Haven't started on revisions yet, as I've been hard at work finishing my current WIP. But I definitely feel like your advice is what I'd like to follow when I do! I think I'd take my time with my revisions, just to make sure everything is really done right :)

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    1. Thank you! My rewrite has been slow. I'm working on a lot of blogging stuff right now and my focus has kind of shifted there for the time being. But hopefully soon I'll be able to get back into the swing of things and then we can exchange our stuff!

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    2. Agreed! I really still want to push through with our exchange. It might take me a while longer than I thought it would to complete my project, but I'm happy to read yours whenever you're ready to share it!

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    3. Yes, same for me! As soon as I make some decent headway on my WIP and fall back into a routine I will most definitely send it to you to read! And same goes for you. Just send it along whenever you're ready!

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  4. This was so interesting to read! I'm caught somewhere in between; I have yet to finish an entire draft of anything BUT I think it's because I rewrite while I write, which isn't the best idea. I can write fast when I sit down to write (about your speed) but if I hit a roadblock, I stop instead of pushing through. I want it to be right. And then I'll go back and add scenes and tinker with word choice. I rewrote the beginning of my current WIP recently and like it so much more. I really need to just get all the words on the page and wait for revisions but revisions seem so stressful to think about. I need to get into better writing habits. Anyway, good luck with your revisions! I definitely think slow and steady is the way to go. Might rule out more revisions in the future :)

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    1. Yeah, I've read a million posts that say to never edit while you're actually writing, but it's so hard not to!! I kind of force myself to leave it alone and I've actually read some tips where people change the text color to white so they can't see it while they're actually writing. I don't know if I could ever do that, but it's a good idea if you're trying to stop the in-writing editing! Yes, I am hoping that by writing slower during the rewrite, I won't have such a huge mountain of crap to fix again. Lol. Good luck with your WIP!

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